Friday, 11 January 2013

The Next Big Thing - The Duke's Shadow


Thanks to Vanessa Couchman, for tagging me in The Next Big Thing Blog. Vanessa is a fellow member of Writers Abroad and a talented, versatile writer. She puts her writing skills to use in her day job as a corporate business writer and regularly writes non-fiction pieces for various markets. Vanessa has also had success in the short story and flash fiction market and has won a Writing Magazine competition for one of her pieces, a prestigious accolade in the writing world. And just lately she has turned her writing hand to more longer pieces, having participated in NaNoWriMo 2012 with her project, The House of Zaronza – her Next Big Thing.

What is the working title of your next book?
Ha, I had to laugh at next… all my ‘books’ are works in progress. But I do have plans to have ‘The Duke’s Shadow’ published by hook or by crook this year – 2013.

Where did the idea come from for the book?
It actually came from another book by Bill Bryson, ‘Notes from a Tiny Island’. He makes reference to visiting Welbeck Abbey, which once belonged to family seat of the Dukes of Portland. The fifth Duke of Portland, known as the Mad Duke, was a bit of a mystery but he invested a lot of time and money in the Abbey. It has a vast array of underground tunnels which meant he could get in and out without being seen and a due to his love of horses he built the second largest riding house in the country. He also made a large rink for roller skating when it became fashionable. On further reading of this introverted but fascinating man, I discovered a rumour that he had a second identity, which has never been proven, but which I have fictionalised for the purposes of my novel.

What genre does your book fall under?
I would say first and foremost historical, though many historians might beg to differ. I work on the pretext that historians write about facts and historical writers tell the story.

Which actors would you choose to play the part of your characters in a movie rendition?
Colin Firth for the Duke; Maggie Smith for his mother, The Duchess (if she hadn’t already been taken for Downton so I’ll have to think of someone else); Alex Kingston for his sister, Lottie; Elizabeth Taylor look for his spurned lover the opera singer and Annette Benning for Amelia, the woman he marries. For the creepy butler, Mabbot I would have to cast John Malcovic, though he might even be too creepy! Such Fun!

What is the one sentence synopsis of your book?
William Kenilworth is a young aristocrat who was never born to be a duke, when his elder brother dies he creates a second identity which he hopes will give him the life he yearns for whilst serving his obligations to his family and his legacy.

Will your book be self published or represented by an agency?
I would love to be represented by an agency but need to buckle down to a marketing plan. If not I will self publish the novel.

How long did it take you to write the first draft of the manuscript?
30 days as part of the NaNoWriMo challenge 2011, though I did do quite a lot of planning, something I’ve discovered helps my writing, rather than hindering it. I always thought I was a sort of ‘fly by the seat of my pants’ kind of writer… but I don’t think anyone is.

What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?
I couldn’t possibly say, I told you that I need to work on my marketing strategy!

What or who inspired you to write this book?
Lots of people; my mother, who I lost all sense of communication with due to Alzheimer’s; my writing group, Writers Abroad, all of whom are so constructive and have helped to build my confidence and skills as a writer; and most of all my husband, who always has so much faith in me.

What else about the book might pique the readers interest?
It is set in mid Victorian times when there was a lot of changes going on industrially, culturally and most importantly for women. Although the main character is male, he is very influence by the women in his life and I hope grows as a character because of that. That someone could create a second identity is also an intriguing plot line if not a complicated one and I hope to make the transitions smooth. Truth will out no doubt.

I’m supposed to tag other writers to this, but despite my efforts I have been unable to find anyone who hasn’t already been tagged or has a project which they would like to tag. So if you are reading this and would like to be tagged  - shout out and I shall do my duty…

Monday, 7 January 2013

Rising from the Ashes

It's been a long time since I blogged. I was intending to take only couple of months off but life, as usual, had other plans. So like the proverbial Phoenix rising from the ashes, it's the time to dust of the cobwebs and knuckle down. I'm not a great fan of the New Year, I must admit. The pressure (most of it of my own making) to put on a happy face and welcome the opportunity of a 'clean sheet' can be a little wearing. I don't make resolutions, but I do always make a writing plan (this year I've called it a 'pledge', more of an intention than a plan!).
It's a pretty ambitious list of pledges, but I'm going to be celebrating (very quietly) a big 'O' birthday this year, and I just have to make a big effort to become a published writer of a novel. That might be the traditional way, though highly unlikely. And the only one who can make it happen is me. So I'm dedicating my spare time (of which I have more than most) to making 2013 'that' year.

Resurrecting my blog wasn't one of them actually but a request from a friend had me thinking (more of which you will find out in the next post).

So, a Happy New Year to all my fellow writers, many of whom I shall be needing a strong shoulder to lean on and a constructive deconstruct of my scribbling....

Until Later


Friday, 7 September 2012

Friday Review




Yep, tis that time already. I'm feeling fairly chuffed with my writing week - chuffed is a northern(UK) term for the uninitiated, meaning pleased! For the following reasons, I'm giving myself a good old pat on the back.






  • I've almost got my third chapter rewritten ready for submitting for a critique, this one from my pals over at WA - the rewrites go there first as I trust their judgement and their constructive feedback, we've sort of grown up together as writers, so it's a safe place. I have until Sunday to get it in as my week starts on a Monday.
  • I wrote and submitted a Muse (creative free write) - the prompt I chose was about a Christmas tree decorations taking a life of their own and I developed a malevolent fairy... fun stuff but could grow into something else, one never knows.
  • And finally I've managed four out of five blog entries planned this week. What happened to the fifth? I just forgot to do it yesterday...

So it's that time... POETS day - it still applies even if I don't go 'out' to work Monday to Friday...

Until Later


Wednesday, 5 September 2012

Keeping on Track

Well, my second submission goal of this week has just been achieved. Having rewritten Chapter 5 The Duke's Shadow following comment from my fellow WA members, it has now been submitted to the Historical Fiction Group... I just loving ticking off these actions in red pen - how sad is that? But that's not the point, I've made a commitment and stuck to it. Now the waiting game for comments... double torture!

I love writing prompts and one I came across today really got me thinking... You find a way to go back in time and are allowed to take one object with you...' Now there lies a conundrum - does a fountain pen and pad count as one object?

Until Later... 

Tuesday, 4 September 2012

By The Skin of My Teeth

My main goal today, was to upload a new first chapter of The Duke's Shadow for critique over at Critique Circle. 
I've been a member there for some months and have been building up my credits as I plan to submit all chapters for a third read there. They have already gone through my online group Writers Abroad, then over to Historical Fiction Writers but after a third edit I thought it would be useful to review the changes. I know, it's like self induced torture! It's my first time being on the receiving end over at CC - waiting in anticipation *bites nails*....

Monday, 3 September 2012

Writing Plan Update


You do have a writing plan don't you? No? Well I do, written in January (well, when else should one write one?) Reviewed in April and I've just finished looking at it over the weekend. *Hangs Head in Shame*

The thing is with writing, like many other activities, is that one can get a little 'over zealous' with deadlines and actions. I've always had a problem with setting realistic goals, even when I was working in a 'proper' job. I'm not sure why but I seem to want to knock myself out - on paper at any rate - and then feel despondent and fed up when I've failed to achieve what I set out to do.

So I've looked at a three month plan - where I can make up time whenever I wish - and should take me through until the end of November with the following goals. They are not as 'SMART' as they could be but nevertheless, they mean something to me and easy to measure.


  1. Rewrite 7 chapters of The Dukes Shadow for critique. The first critique will be over at Writers Abroad and the second at Historical Fiction. I plan also to start sharing with some beta readers at Critique Circle...
  2. Rewrite 3 chapters of the The Good Life to submit as monthly challenges at Writers Abroad - this is my fun thing, a bit of personal indulgence and therefore a treat.
  3. Review status of 'Wolf Moon' - the fantasy novella I started and have completed around 13k word
  4. Take part in NaNoWriMo 2012 - I've done some research and need to start some characterisation, again a different part of the writing process so hopefully will weave in fairly well.
And December? Well either free for catch up when I come to review this post or a long, long sleeeep.

Until Later, 

Friday, 31 August 2012

Musin'



Well, almost the beginning of a new month, so I've ended this one with a Monday Muse... yes, I know it's Friday but I have to let it mulch for at least four days. At Writers Abroad we have a regular Monday Muse - members take it in turns to submit some creative writing prompts and the idea is to free write. Yep, write without thinking, but of course most writers do think. I write the muses down on the Monday and by Friday (usually) I've got an idea. Then I do sit and free write for 20 minutes (or 500 words approx) and submit my piece on site. The idea is NOT to produce a finely polished story (though many members are good at doing this) but to allow yourself the space and the routine to just write.

It feels good to muse, I always see it as an accomplishment because it is a new bit of writing. It might not set the world on fire in its raw state, but many WA members have gone on and had fully edited and sparkling pieces published on the basis of a muse. So can't be all that bad.

Now onto Chapter Six of The Dukes Shadow...